Question

假如你叫小明，你现在给刚认识的笔友Tony写一封信。在信中你介绍自己的情况：八年级学生，家住衢州龙游；你的爱好是：收集赛车模型，喜欢运动，尤其是各种球类运动，对学习英语感兴趣，也会唱很多英文歌；将来想去英国参观、旅游或学习。

要求：字数70左右，表达要简洁、清晰、流畅

Dear Tony,

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Yours

Xiaoming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

I am so glad to introduce myself to you. I study in a junior middle school. I am in Grade Two. Now I live in Longyou,Quzhou.I am interested in collecting model cars. I like sports very much. Playing basketball is my favourite sport. I also enjoyed learning English. I like singing English songs. I have learned a lot of English songs since I began to study English. I take great interests in Britain and I am looking forward to visiting Britain and studying there in the future.

Best wishes,

Yours

Xiaoming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求给笔友Tony写一封信，介绍自己的情况。这篇作文给出要点比较多，要理清要点，把要点一一表达出来。句型尽量要疯丰富些，不要太过单一。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅介绍喜好时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如在表达喜好时用了：be interested in doing, like…very much,…is my favorite …,enjoy doing等，使短文看起来句型丰富。另外在介绍学英语歌时，用到了现在完成时，look forward to doing，使文章增色不少。

考点：给材料作文