Question

书面表达
假设你是珍妮，中考后你将参加赴英国的“名校之行”夏令营活动。请你根据以下表格提供的信息准备一篇在开营仪式的自我介绍发言稿。
注意：1.、词数：60-80左右。2、发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3、可根据内容适当发挥。

Name	Age	Free time activities	Future job	Hope	Favorite subject
Jenny	15	draw pictures of animals enjoy the singing of birds in nature listen to music read English books…	teacher	make good friends …	English

Dear Friend,
I’m very happy to be in this Summer Camp to know about the famous universities in London.I’m glad to introuduce myself to you.                                         
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
That’s all.Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Dear Friend,
I’m very happy to be in this Summer Camp to know about the famous universities in London.I’m glad to introuduce myself to you. My name is jenny. I’m fifteen years old. I live in Guangzhou. One of my favorite subjects is English. I’m also interested in drawing. In my free time, i often draw some pictures of animals, listen to music and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. I also like reading English books. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good firends.
That’s all.Thank you for listening.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的发言稿文。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。