Question

为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是王宏，用英语给校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Headmaster,
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will___________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less and more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封建议信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，为了使说明更具逻辑性，适当使用序数词。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。