Question

书面表达（共20分）

Answer 1

 
My hometowm
There used to be many factories in my hometown. The workers often put the waste into the rivers. So the rivers were very dirty and many fish died.
Luckily, our government realized the problem and took action. Many factories moved away. The air is fresh and the rivers are clean again. People can swim in the rivers. Now my hometown has turned into a modern town. There are many places of interest and a lot of tourists come to my hometown every year.
Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。