题目内容
请根据申请表内容完成90词左右的申请信
Name | Zhao Yang | Date of birth | 2000年10月20日 |
Tele. number | 0519—82835988 | 8344506@qq.com | |
School | No.6 Middle School | Grade | 8 |
Favourite subjects | 生物、英语 | Interests and hobbies | 收集各种动物图片、听音乐 |
reasons | 喜爱大自然,对植物动物感兴趣, 想要更多的了解鸟,人们砍伐树,鸟越来越少,想做些事情来保护鸟 | ||
Free time | 每周日全天 | ||
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 at No.6 Middle School. My favorite subject is Biology and English. I am interested in collecting the pictures of different animals and listening to music.
Last spring, I went to Zhalong Nature Reserve and took part in activities to protect birds with my friends, I enjoy the natural world, and I’m interested in learning different kinds of plants and animals. I want to know more about the birds.
Some people want to cut down trees. As a result, the number of the birds is becoming smaller and smaller. I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. I can take part in activities all day every Saturday.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on 0519-82835988 or email me at 8344506@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者以申请信的形式介绍自己的一般情况、爱好以及申请加入的原因。全文涉及到多个时态,如用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,例如be interested in, listen to, take part in, different kinds of , cut down, as a result, smaller and smaller., all day,call me on ,email me at 等短语,文中还用到了条件状语从句 if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society.宾语从句 I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. 文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。
考点:提纲作文。
