Question

1．假设你是李华，请在答题卡相应位置用英语给你的美国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他以下事情：
（1）感谢他给你寄来的那些书．你非常喜欢它们，每晚睡前都会读几页．请他下次来信时给你介绍一些美国的节日．
（2）非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家乡．你愿意作他的导游．你们可以一起参观一些有趣的地方．
（3）顺便问一下，这些天他是否在电视中看世界杯．
注意事项：
（1）文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名等内容．
（2）可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
（3）词数70-110，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
邮寄：mail/post v．
导游：guide n．
世界杯：the World Cup
Dear Jim，
How is it going？Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places．
By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇提纲作文，因为是书信的体裁，所以时态要根据实际情况注意变换，写作要点包括：1．感谢他给你寄来的那些书，请他下次来信时给你介绍一些美国的节日．2．非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家乡．3．顺便问一下，这些天他是否在电视中看世界杯．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Jim，
     How is it going？
     Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
     I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around
some nice places．
     By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
     Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                    Yours，Li Hua

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．