Question

书面表达

假如你叫张霖，暑假后就要进入高中(senior middle school)学习。由于住校(live at school)与住在家里各有利弊，你想通过e-mail征求英国笔友Bill的意见。内容应包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。

注意：1、字数要控制在100词左右。

2、不要出现你的真实姓名。

3、开头和结尾已经给出，不记入总数。

Dear Bill,

　　How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much．So I’m writing to ask for your advice．

　　_______________________________________

　　It’s so hard for me to make a decision．I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions．

　　Please write back soon．

Zhang Lin

Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： 　　Dear Bill, 　　How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much．So I’m writing to ask for your advice． 　　I’m going to study in the senior middle school in September．I can live either at school or at home．But I can’t decide because both have advantages and disadvantages． 　　At home, I have my own room．So I can have a good sleep．However, I have to share one room with 5-6 students at school．Maybe I can’t sleep well．It’s a problem．Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates．I think it’s great fun and I can make more friends．If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school．It’s a waste of time and not safe． 　　It’s so hard to make a decision．I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions． 　　Please write back soon． Zhang Lin 　　评分说明： 　　要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分： 　　1、短文通顺完整，表达清楚，语言基本无误，13－15分； 　　2、短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，9－12分； 　　3、能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，5－8分； 　　4、仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－4分。