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假如你叫张宾，Jimmy是你的笔友，他下个月就要到中国旅游。请你根据下面e-mail给他介绍国内非常值得一去的地方。

省／市	供考虑的地点
首都北京	长城――世界七大奇迹之一；故宫博物馆――辉煌壮丽的清朝宫殿群；圆明园――举世闻名的皇家园林。
陕西省	秦陵兵马俑――世界上著名的景点；华山――悬崖峭壁，山势险峻；离西安不远。
湖南省	张家界——一个四周环山的好地方。

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词数：80左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：imperial adj.　皇帝的steep adj.陡峭的  the Terra Cotta Warriors秦陵兵马俑
Dear Jimmy,
I am very glad to hear that you’ll come to China for a visit next month. Now I will teel you something about the places of interest in China.
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Oh, I must stop now. I hope you will have a good trip!
Good luck!
Yours
Zhang Bin

Answer 1

Dear Jimmy,
I am very glad to hear that you’ll come to China for a visit next month. Now I will teel you something about the places of interest in China.
First, Beijing is the capital of China. There are many amazing places you can’t miss. For example, the Great Wall—one of the seven wonders in the world. The Palace Museum—the Imperial Palace of the Qing Dynasty; Yuanmingyuan—a famous imperial garden.
Second, you’d better go to Xi’an of Shanxi province for the Terra Cotta Warriors lies there. They are the most famous in the world. And you may also go to Huashan—a dangerously steep mountain. It’s not far from Xi’an.
At last, I hope you’ll pay a visit to Hunan. Hunan is famous for Zhangjiajei, a beautiful place with mountains and rivers.
Oh, I must stop now. I hope you will have a good trip!
Good luck!

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