Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Jim最近沉溺于(be crazy about…)玩电脑游戏，为此你很担心。请根据下表提示给Jim 写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。

Jim 过去	功课好，积极参加学校的各项活动。
Jim 现在	对学习没兴趣，上课不专心，不按时完成作业。
你的看法	玩电脑游戏可能使你放松，但……
你的建议	(至少发挥两点)

要求：1. 词数80左右。2. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.
You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time. Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may be bad for your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and hands.
I hope you should concentrate more on your schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when you feel bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with your friends?
Yours
Li Hua

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。