Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已经给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，收到你的笔友Jim的来信，信中谈到他最近沉迷于电脑游戏中，他认为这不仅有损身心健康，而且还影响学习，为此，他很苦恼。请根据这封信的内容，给Jim写一封回信，谈谈你的看法及建议。

Dear Li Hua, These days I always play computer games for a long time. As a result, it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time. Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons. I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health, but I can’t stop doing it. I’m angry with myself. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Please write to me soon. Yours, Jim

 

Dear Jim, Don’t be angry with yourself.                                                   Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
Don’t be angry with yourself. I really feel worried about you. I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time playing computer games. It is bad for not only your study but also your health.
As a student, schoolwork is the most important thing for you. So remember to finish your homework first after school. And it’s also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free. That will help you forget computer games. What’s more, you’d better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class. I hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。本文材料主要通过一份来信给出，故动笔前要认真阅读来信，争取对来信内容都有所回应。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。