Question

上周的班会课上，九年级的学生就看电视展开了激烈的辩论。Daniel记录了班上学生的一些主要看法。请帮他用英语表达学生的主要观点，并谈谈自己的看法。
好处：1.看电视帮我们更多地了解世界，从中学习到很多有用的知识。
2.它有助于我们放松并使我们的生活更有趣。各种各样精彩的节目老少皆宜。
不足：3.看太多电视对我们的眼睛有害。一些学生每天看电视超过四个小时。
4.大量的学生着迷于他们最喜欢的节目。结果没有足够的时间完成家作。
我认为5.……(2-3句)
注意：
1. 第5要点的内容须用2～3句话作适当发挥；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。                                                      
I am David, a Grade 9 student. We had a discussion about watching TV . We think watching TV has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                                                                                                          

Answer 1

I am David, a Grade 9 student. We had a discussion about watching TV. We think watching TV has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. Watching TV helps us learn more about the world. We can learn a lot of useful knowledge. It can help us relax and make our lives more interesting. All kinds of wonderful programmes are suitable for all ages. But watching too much TV is bad for our eyes. Some students watch TV more than four hours every day. Plenty of students are crazy about their favourite programmes. As a result, they don’t have enough time to finish their homework. I think students shouldn’t watch too much TV. They should achieve a balance between their study and TV. They can watch TV for one or two hours at the weekend.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提示内容完成这篇表达个人看法的作文，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含看电视的好处、不足以及习作者自己的看法等，关键要适当发挥表达出自己的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一、三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】 这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了班会课上讨论的对看电视的看法，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，同时也表达出了自己的观点。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含动名词短语做主语的准确使用为文章增色不少.如 help us relax and make our lives more interesting，more than four hours，are crazy about， watching too much TV is bad for our eyes， achieve a balance between their study and TV.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。