Question

书面表达。 （满分15分）
2014年高考改革引发了热议，许多人对中国学生学习英语的重要性有了更多的思考。请你针对这一现象写一篇文章谈谈自己的观点以及如何才能更轻松地学好英语。（不写标题，字数不少于80字）
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         

Answer 1

In my opinion, learning English well is very important for us. Because English is widely used around the world. It’s used as the first or official language in many countries. And two thirds of the world’s scientists read and write in English. About 200 million users of the Internet communicate in English, too.
But how to study English better? I think we must have a good way to study English. If you want to learn English well, listening, speaking, reading and writing are important. You should listen to the tapes every day,speak English as often as possible or read English every morning .Keeping a diary is the same important.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
Where there is a will, there is a way. If you can work harder at English, you will succeed in learning it well.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细：英语学习的重要性；如何学好英语两个方面。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。使用了适当的连词及谚语，为文章增色不少.如: 归纳总结类In my opinion 我的观点是， 因果关系Because，并联关系And， But how to study English better?但怎样学英语更好呢，引起下文，起到承上启下的作用.Where there is a will, there is a way有志者，事竟成。引用谚语更有说服力。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.