题目内容
【题目】写作。(15分)
请你以“My Dream Home”为题来谈谈自己的梦想家园。可根据下面提示的内容适当发挥。
社区情况 | 邻居很友好,他们有不同的技能,帮助我们解决各种难题。志愿者们很乐意帮忙。 |
周围环境 | 附近有一个公园,空气很新鲜,人们可以在里面慢跑和散步。 |
房子概况 | 有两层,有个阳台,可以向外看到海滩和大海。房子后面有个花园,和家人一起在花园里玩得很开心。 |
内部设施 | 有一个属于自己的卧室……(至少写一句话) |
要求:1. 语句通顺、语言规范。2. 书写工整、标点符号正确,应适当发挥。
3. 词数:70词左右。
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【答案】
My Dream Home
In my neighborhood ,my neighbors are friendly to each other. They have different kills and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. There is a park near my dream home. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are two floors and a big garden in my house. In the garden , we can plant many flowers. It is very beautiful. There are two bedrooms,one is for my parents ,the other is for me .
I like my dream room very much.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍介绍自己的梦想家园。应用一般现在时态,人称是第一人称。
写作亮点:这篇小短文要点全面,并有适当发挥,基本没有语法错误。