Question

最近的一项研究调查表明，大约20%的学生有不吃早饭的习惯。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。

原   因	1. 晚上学习太晚，想多睡一会儿而不吃早饭；
2. 家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；
3. 一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏，一些女生想保持苗条不吃早饭。
后   果	1. 上课无精打采，成绩下降；
2. 身体越来越差……
你的建议	？（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）

     注意：词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）

     A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

    A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast. Also their parents are too busy to look after them and so they just give some money to their children to buy food themselves. But some boys use the money to play computer games and some girls just want to keep slim without having breakfast. As a result, some students have no energy in class. They have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier. I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport. So we should have breakfast every day.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写一些学生不吃早饭的原因，为什么要吃早饭，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如stay up，instead of，look after ， too... To...,look after ，as a result，in class，worse and worse ， unhealthier and unhealthier 等短语；宾语从句如A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast， I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport..；表语从句如That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。