Question

最近的一项研究调查表明，大约20%的学生有不吃早饭的习惯。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。

原   因	1. 晚上学习太晚，想多睡一会儿而不吃早饭；
2. 家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；
3. 一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏，一些女生想保持苗条不吃早饭。
后   果	1. 上课无精打采，成绩下降；
2. 身体越来越差……
你的建议	？（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）

     注意：词数90词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）

     A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s ____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast. Also their parents are too busy to look after them and so they just give some money to their children to buy food themselves. But some boys use the money to play computer games and some girls just want to keep slim without having breakfast. As a result, some students have no energy in class. They have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier. I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport. So we should have breakfast every day.

【解析】

 试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求结合表格中的内容完成这篇调查报告，我们要用恰当地道的英语把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含调查结果中所列举的学生不吃早饭的三个原因、由此造成的后果、并发表一下你自己的建议等几个方面进行陈述。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了调查结果：包括原因、后果和建议等，并包含了表格中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含形容词比较级和过度语的准确使用为文章增色不少.如are too busy to look after them，have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier.，As a result,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。