Question

写作（20分）。 请以I love my family 为题，写一篇成长感言， 内容包括：

1。 介绍你的家人。

2。 描述一件最令你感动的事。

3。 表达你的感激之情。

具体要求； 1。 不少于80词。 2。 字迹工整

3。 不使用真名。 4。 语法准确，语句通顺

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Answer 1

There are five people in my family. They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and me. My parents work in a big city in order to make money for living. We live with my grandmother in a small town. My sister and I are students. We study hard. They all love me.

Last year, I was ill. I had a fever at midnight. But it was raining outside. My home is far away from the hospital. My grandmother was so worried about me, she took me to the hospital and looked after me all the night.

I love my family, I love my grandmother. I hope my parents can work in my hometown. And we can take care of my grandmother well.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。