Question

【题目】按要求完成大作文，词数60-80词.（共15分）

请你谈谈吸烟的危害，力劝吸烟人士戒烟

Answer 1

【答案】

Today smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. Not only the old, the youth, but also middle school students have been engaged in smoking. Many of them think that smoking is a smart symbol.

However, smoking is harmful to one's health. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. It can also cause many other diseases. In a word, if you smoke, you do have a much greater chance of losing your health. Furthermore, scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health, especially to women and children. Therefore, many countries have made laws forbidding smokers to smoke in public places such as cinemas, stations, hospitals, and so on. Give up smoking! If you don't smoke, don't start. Give up smoking for the sake of your health, for the sake of your family, and for the sake of the whole world.

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇命题作文，主要谈吸烟的危害性，然后劝人们戒烟。题目对写作内容没有做明确的限定，在写作前，一定要理清思路，想好写作要点，列出提纲，例如吸烟给人们带来某些危害，各种危害之间可以用序数词或者其它的连接词有序地组织成文。最后可以呼吁大家来戒烟。

写作亮点： 这是篇非常优秀的作文，文章结构非常清楚，首先讲述了抽烟的普遍性，接着谈论了其危害性，最后呼吁大家戒烟。文章中用了很多的连词，使表达非常的流畅，例如However然而，also也，In a word总而言之，Furthermore除此之外，Therefore所以等。文章中也使用了很多长难句，如. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years它可以导致肺癌，在过去的很多年里很多人就死于这个疾病。scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health, especially to women and children.科学家研究表明抽烟不只是对抽烟者有害，也是对公共健康的一个威胁，尤其是对妇女和儿童。