题目内容
14.随着社会的发展,网上购物在我们的日常生活中成为一种流行的购物方式.请根据下表提示,谈谈网上购物的利与弊.提示:
(1)语句流畅,书写规范;
(2)包含提示内容,并可适当发挥;
(3)词数80左右;
(4)文中不能出现人名,地名等正式信息.
Advantages | Disadvantages |
方便convenient;24小时营业;不用出家门 | 看不见物品;容易受到欺骗(be cheated);不能享受到和朋友一起购物的乐趣 |
In my opinion,everything has two sides.Whether shopping online depends on your time.If you have time,it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things.If you are too busy,it's a good idea to shop online,but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy..
分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是根据表里的内容谈谈网上购物的利与弊.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第二人称
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1有利之处:方便;24小时营业;不用出家门
2.不利之处:看不见物品;容易受到欺骗,不能享受到和朋友一起购物的乐趣
3.我的看法
常用到的重点短语:
wait in line.排队
What's more再者
each coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性
In one‘s opinion依某人看来
depend on取决于…
be convenient for sb对某人是方便的
it's adj for sb to do sth 对某人来说做某事是怎么样的
高分句型:
1. It opens 24 hours,which is very convenient for you.
which is very convenient for you.是一个非限制性的定语从句,修饰的是前面的整个主句 It opens 24 hours.which是关系词,作为定语从句的主语.
2.②Because you can't see the real things ②you want to buy,you ③are easily cheated.
①because引导的原因状语从句.
②定语从句,修饰先行词the real things,关系词是which或者that,作为定语从句buy的宾语,可以省略.
③一般现在时的被动语态,主语是you,是cheat的承受者,结构为are+cheated(过去分词)
解答 Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now.(点题)There are some advantages,especially for busy people.If you shop online,you needn't wait in line.It opens 24 hours,which is very convenient for you.(高分句型)(有利之处) However,it also has some disadvantages.(承上启下)Because you can't see the real things you want to buy,you are easily cheated.(高分句型)What's more,you can't enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends.(不利之处)
In my opinion,each coin has two sides.Whether shopping online depends on your time.If you have time,it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things.If you are too busy,it's a good idea to shop online,but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy.(我的看法)
点评 这是一篇给材料作文,要点已经通过一个表格形式给出.动笔之前要认真阅读材料,不能遗漏要点.给出的材料较为简略,可以适当发挥.可以适当使用两介词使语意通顺,句子连贯,短文最后可以发表一点自己的看法.
A. | allows | B. | believes | C. | beats | D. | leaves |
乐观者的观点 | 1)世界变得更好 2)生活水平提高 3)人的寿命更长 |
担心者的观点 | 1)世界变得更挤 2)环境问题更多 3)能源变得更少 |
你自己的观点 | 考生自拟(至少两点) |
1)词数90左右.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2)短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息.
参考词汇:水平、标准standard n.; 观点、看法opinion n.
Life in the future:for better or worse?
Many students are optimistic(乐观的)about the next fifty years.In fact,they thinkthat the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly improved.As a result,people will have a higher standard of living and live longer.
However,other students are worried about the future.They say the world will become more crowded.Therefore,we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.
But in my opinion,I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone willlive more happily..