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7．随着电子商务的发展，网上购物已经越来越流行了，请根据下列提示词，描述一下你第一次网购的经历．要点与参考词汇：want to buy a book，excited，pay money，wait for a long time，broken，sad，call the seller，change，honest，at last，learn
写作要求：1．内容必须包括上面提示的要点，并可以适当发挥．
2．文章结构合理，条理清晰，语句连贯、行文流畅．
3．词数：80词左右．短文开头已给出，你可以选择使用，或者自己从头开始写．（如选用开头，请接着从下一行开始写，开头不计入总词数．如不选用开头，请空两行，自己从头开始写）
It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business．I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time．I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore．So I decided to buy a book online．I felt a little excited because it was my first time．After paying money online，I waited for a long time．
When the book arrived，it was broken．I felt really angry and called the seller．The seller agreed to change anther book for me．I learn that being honest is important in online shopping．At last I got the new book and felt happy．．
分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是描述一下你第一次网购的经历．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．网购的经历
2．我的感受
常用到的重点短语：
want to do sth 想要做某事
decide to do sth 决定去做某事
wait for等…
fell+adj感觉怎样
agree to do sth赞同做某事
高分句型：
1．After paying money online，I waited for a long time．
after paying money online是个省略句，after用作介词，意为在…之后，表达的意义是after I paid money online，从句主语和主句的主语一致，从句中的主语可以省略．after后跟动名词．
2．I learn①that②being honest is important in online shopping．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为learn的宾语．
②being honest动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
解答 It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business．I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time．（点题，引出下文）
I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore．So I decided to buy a book online．I felt a little excited because it was my first time．After paying money online，I waited for a long time．（高分句型）
When the book arrived，it was broken．I felt really angry and called the seller．The seller agreed to change anther book for me．At last I got the new book and felt happy．（经历））I learn that being honest is important in online shopping．（高分句型）（感受）
点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．
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根据文章内容，完成下列表格．
Lin Li，a teacher from Yantai，gives young students some advice on how to deal with danger．
If you are in a traffic accident
If a car hits you，you should remember the car number．If it is a bicycle，try to call your parents before you let the rider go．This is because you don't know how seriously you are hurt．
If it is raining hard and there is lightning
Don't stay in high places and stay away from trees．
When there is a fire
Get away as fast as you can．Put wet things on your body and try to find an exit．Don't take the lift．
If someone is drowning
If you can't swim，don't get into water．Cry out for help．
Remember that danger is never as far away as you think．Take care or yourself at all times!
If you are robbed （抢劫）
Keep calm．If you can not cry for help or run away，give the robber your money．Try to remember what the robber looks like and tell the police later．
根据文章内容，完成下列表格．
| Best title：（56）How to deal with danger | |
| Danger | What to do |
| （57）traffic accident | ◆If hit by a car，you're supposed to（58）remember the car number ◆If hit by a bike，call your parents． |
| Raining with lightning | Stay at low places and keep away from trees． |
| Fire | Don't take the lift and find an（59）exit as fast as you can． |
| Drowning | If you can't swim，just shout"Help!" |
| Robbery | ◆Keep calm． ◆Remember the robber's（60）appearance and tell the police later． |
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14．随着社会的发展，网上购物在我们的日常生活中成为一种流行的购物方式．请根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊．
提示：
（1）语句流畅，书写规范；
（2）包含提示内容，并可适当发挥；
（3）词数80左右；
（4）文中不能出现人名，地名等正式信息．
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now．There are some advantages，especially for busy people．If you shop online，you needn't wait in line．It opens 24 hours，which is very convenient for you．However，it also has some disadvantages．Because you can't see the real things you want to buy，you are easily cheated．What's more，you can't enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends．
In my opinion，everything has two sides．Whether shopping online depends on your time．If you have time，it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things．If you are too busy，it's a good idea to shop online，but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy．．
提示：
（1）语句流畅，书写规范；
（2）包含提示内容，并可适当发挥；
（3）词数80左右；
（4）文中不能出现人名，地名等正式信息．
| Advantages | Disadvantages |
| 方便convenient；24小时营业；不用出家门 | 看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）；不能享受到和朋友一起购物的乐趣 |
In my opinion，everything has two sides．Whether shopping online depends on your time．If you have time，it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things．If you are too busy，it's a good idea to shop online，but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy．．