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2．你校将举行"校园之星（Campus Star）"评选活动，各班就"校园之星"的评选标准展开了讨论．以下是你班同学的部分观点，请将这些观点进行整理．并结合你自已的想法，写一篇 发言稿参加学生会评选委员会的讨论．

同学们的观点	诚实礼貌，有漫心  有爱心
	学习勤奋，有进步
	兴趣广泛，有特长
	…
你的观点	…

注意l．发言稿应包括表中信息，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
2．开头已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；
3．文章中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
4．词数：80一110．
Hello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/sheHello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/she should be an honest person first．He is also polite and ready to help others any time． Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．He studies hard，and makes great progress every term．Third，a star should have wide interests．He takes an active part in sports and other activities．And he is popular at school．
　In my opinion，a Campus Star must be a green person．He loves nature．He takes care of the trees and grass around him and tries his best to protect the environment． That's all．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是就"校园之星"的评选标准将同学们的观点进行整理再说说自己的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1同学们的观点（1）诚实礼貌，有漫心  有爱心；（2）学习勤奋，有进步；（3）兴趣广泛，有特长
2我的观点

常用到的重点短语：
be ready to do sth准备好做某事
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
make progress取得进步
in one's opinion依某人看来
take care of照顾
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事

高分句型：
1．Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…，连接两个对等的成分，这里是连接两个名词短语．
2．He ①takes care of the trees and grass ②around him and ③tries his best to protect the environment．
①take care of照顾
②around him介词短语作为后置定语，修饰前面的trees and grass．
③try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事．

解答 Hello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/she should be an honest person first．He is also polite and ready to help others any time．（诚实礼貌，有爱心） Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．（高分句型）He studies hard，and makes great progress every term．（学习勤奋，有进步）Third，a star should have wide interests．He takes an active part in sports and other activities．And he is popular at school．（兴趣广泛，有特长）
In my opinion，a Campus Star must be a green person．He loves nature．He takes care of the trees and grass around him and tries his best to protect the environment．（高分句型） That's all．（我的观点）

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．