Question

书面表达。(共一题，计10分)

请根据下面提供的信息，以My Penfriend 为题，写一篇英语短文，字数在70字左右。

要点如下，请适当发挥想象力，不必逐句翻译：

王飞，一个14岁的男孩子，他来自上海，现就读于上海实验中学七年级一班。

戴着眼镜，短发，看起来…今天他穿着… ,很好看。

学习刻苦，每天7点起床，晚上9点睡觉。

很少吃零食，因为他想要……最喜欢春节，因为……

待人很有礼貌，乐于助人，他经常……多好的一个男孩子啊！

开头已给出，不计总词数。

Tip:上海实验中学 Shanghai Experimental Secondary

My penfriend

I have a penfriend. His name is Wang Fei.

                                                                           

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I have many friends, and they have different favorite subjects. John’s favorite subject is computer because he thinks computer can help him a lot in his study. He is a computer fan. He likes playing computer games very much, and he is good at playing it. Jack likes art best because he likes drawing pictures a lot. Mary likes Chinese because her father is Chinese. Her father teaches her Chinese at home. She loves China very much, and she wants to know more about China. Bob think math is very interesting, so he likes math best. David likes P. E. because he likes doing sports. He is good at playing basketball and soccer…….

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达，是介绍一个朋友王飞。所以本文的人称应该是第三人称，在完成句子是应特别注意动词的单三形式，如has 、is、lives、likes等。在写作时，要尽量利用上所给的提示内容，表达时应使句型顺畅并符合英语的习惯表达方法。注意连词的运用，尽量少用排比句，因为英语最忌讳重复。

考点：命题作文。

点评：在写书面表达时首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称（如本题就要用第三人称）；其次，应注意动词的形式，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式（本题要注意单三形式）；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。