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【题目】书面表达

假设你是张明,即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail,告诉他你的假期计划。

注意:

1.至少要写出你在假期打算做的三件事;

2.回信字数要求不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

4. 所给提示词语仅供参考。

参考词汇:

Summer vacation, relax oneself, visit, travel , read, volunteer, housework, play sports

【答案】

Hi, Jack, the summer vacation is coming soon .I want to have a relaxing summer vacation. I feel tired this term so I want to relax myself. First, I will visit Beijing with my parents. We will go there by train .Second, I want to read some English books. Our teacher tells us about some famous English books. I want to read them .Third, I am going to be a volunteer .I want to do things for others .Fourth, I will also stay at home to help mother do some housework, and do some sports.

How will you spend your holiday?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

试题分析这是一篇命题作文。题中已经给出了相关的信息和要求,写作时要注意不要遗漏要点,可充分使用参考词汇。注意文章的时态,因为是对将来的打算,所以可采用一般将来时。写作时尤其注意主谓和时态的正确。可适当使用一些连词来增加文章的逻辑性,使文章更通顺流畅。

写作亮点这篇短文结构完整,要点齐全,表达准确流畅。文章使用了很多实用的表达方式,例如文章使用了一些序列first, second,third,fourth,使文章的结构非常清楚;want to do sth.想做某事;tell sb. about sth,告诉某人某事; 文中也使用了一般将来时的表达,如will, be going to等。

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There were 30 children in the classroom and all were trying to think about not only what they did, but also what our teacher already knew.

“Who broke this window?”

“Uh, Oh.” I thought. I was the one who broke the window with a football. I did not mean to do it. I would be in a lot of trouble. How could I pay for a big window like that? I didn't want to put up my hand. But I had to tell the truth. So, I put up my hand and told the teacher I broke the window.

Miss Green went to the bookshelf and took down a book.

“I know how you like birds, Peter.” She said. “Here is a book about birds and the book is yours now. I will not punish you this time. But Peter, you should remember that I am rewarding (奖赏)you for your honesty(诚实), not for breaking the window.”

I couldn't believe it! The teacher didn't punish me and I was getting my very favorite book. Now, I still use that book, and it always reminds me of (使我想起)the lesson my teacher taught me.

Honesty is always best.

【1】Who broke the window? (No more than 2 words)

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【2】How many children were in the classroom? (No more than 1 word)

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【3】Where did Miss Green take down the book? (No more than 2 words)

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【4】What was the book about? (No more than 2 words)

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【5】What can we learn from the story? (No more than 4 words)

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