Question

【题目】书面表达。 （共15分，请直接书写在答题卡相应的题目后）

同学们进入初二，身体和心理健康非常重要，这是父母和老师非常关心的问题，希望每个人都有一个健康的生活方式。请根据下面提示以Have a healthy lifestyle为题写一篇短文。

1．简述以下现象：

（1）健康之重要人尽皆知，请谈2条优点。

（2）许多青少年不注重健康问题，特别是假期。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体不好，不能和人友好相处。并写出你在国庆节的做的不利于健康的活动。

2．简述你的看法，怎样有一个健康的生活方式，提出你的2条建议。

要求：（1）内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。

（2）词数100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。（特别是，especially)

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is important.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is important. If we have good health, we will be full of energy, so we can do well in our study. But now many teenagers don’t care about it. They often watch TV for a long time. And they have a chat with friends or play computer games on the Internet all the whole night. This will affect their sight and bodies. If they continue to do it, they will not get along well with others.

During the national day, I play computer games until 11:00pm, so I can’t get enough sleep. It is bad for my health. So I think we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should go to bed early. Also, it’s very important to have enough exercise and eat healthy food.

In a word, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important to all.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，介绍健康生活方式的重要性。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：If we have...，we will ...， They often watch TV ...，they will not...，It is bad for...，it’s very important to.....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意提纲中所要求内容。

【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了健康的重要性，接下来介绍我们青少年经常不注重健康以及导致的危害，最后介绍自己对养成健康的生活习惯的建议。此处be full of, do well in, care about, on the Internet, get along with, be bad for等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。