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【题目】书面表达(本题共10分)

根据提示写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍林涛和王军星期天的活动。可适当增加细节。

1. 林涛和王军是好朋友;

2. 今天是星期天,他们不去上学,他们去动物园;

3. 从他们住的居民楼到动物园有10公里,所以他们坐公共汽车去;

4. 动物园里动物真多,他们玩得很高兴。

【答案】

Lin Tao and Wang Jun are good friends. They are often together when they are free. Today is Sunday. They didn’t go to school. They went to the zoo. It’s about ten kilometers away from their home to the zoo, so they went there by bus. There were many animals in the zoo, such as tigers, bears, lions, wolves, monkeys and many other animals. Of all the animals, they liked moneys best. They were very clever and interesting. They were very happy to see so many animals. They had a good time today!

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据题目中给出的提示写一篇短文,介绍林涛和王军星期天的活动。题目中给出了详细的信息,我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来,使用正确的词汇和语法,并且符合英语的表达规范。通过分析可知,这篇短文记叙的是已经发生过的事情,因此我们应该使用一般过去时态,特别要注意每句话的谓语动词形式,都要用过去式,注意不规则动词过去式形式的变化。写作时,除了内容的完整,语句的通顺,我们还应使用一些好的句型,增强文章的表现力,使短文表达更加流畅。

写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文中使用了正确的人称和时态,尤其是注意了动词过去式形式的变化。开头两句话是介绍林涛和王军的基本情况的,作者使用的是一般现在时态,具体记叙星期天的活动时,作者使用了一般过去时态。其次作者的叙述非常有条理,内容也很完整,没有遗漏要点。语句也很通顺,符合英语的表达需要。最后作者还使用了一些好的句式,如It’s about ten kilometers away from their home to the zoo, so they went there by bus.、There were many animals in the zoo, such as tigers, bears, lions, wolves, monkeys and many other animals、They were very happy to see so many animals. They had a good time today!等。这些短语和句型的使用使整篇短文更加连贯、流畅。

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根据短文中的信息完成文后表格。写出空缺处所填单词的正确形式。(每空一词)

Have you ever wondered what an American high school is really like? This article will describe a typical (典型的) high school and its students.

A typical American high school has several large buildings and enough space for about 1500 students. Every student is given a locker. When students first arrive at school they go straight to their lockers to put away or get their textbooks and to hang up their outdoor clothes. As American textbooks are expensive students would like to loan(租借) instead of buying them. Students must pay back if they lost any of them.

American students have different types of school transport. They usually take a yellow school bus or walk to school if they live close enough. Sometimes their parents drive them to school. When they turn 16 years of age most take a free driving class at school for one term. If students earn passing grades in the class and also pass their state driver’s exam they can begin driving themselves to school.

Each day students take six or seven classes. They must take science math English and social studies. They can choose art homemaking fashion design and other classes. In some schools students are required to take one or more of the following special classes health education physical education or foreign language studies. Students move to different classrooms for each subject. This is because each teacher has their own classroom. There is a five-minute break between classes to give the students the time to hurry to their next class.

The regular school day usually ends early in the afternoon. After school more than half of the students take part in after-school activities. These activities include sports-especially football basketball baseball and soccer or clubs such as yearbook speech school newspaper photograph or student government.

Title 【1】 in an American High School

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Introduction

◇It gives an overview of a typical American high school and its 2 .

Lockers and textbooks

◇Every student has a locker for textbooks and 3 clothes.

◇They like loaning textbooks better than 4 them.

5 transport

◇Students usually go to school by bus or on foot. Sometimes their 6 send them to school by car.

◇They can 7 themselves to school when they are over 16 and have passed the required tests.

Classes and classrooms

◇Students have to take main classes elective classes and sometimes one or more8 classes.

◇They go to 9 classrooms for each subject.

After-school activities

◇After school most of the students 【10 in their favourite activities including sports and clubs.

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