Question

春节将至，马上又是新的一年。俗话说“一年之计在于春”，在新的一年里，你有什么计划呢？请以“My  New Year’s Resolutions”为题,写一篇60词左右的作文，介绍一下你的新年计划。
My New Year’s Resolutions
The Spring Festival is coming soon, I have some plans for the new year.
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Answer 1

My New Year’s Resolutions
The Spring Festival is coming soon, I have some plans for the new year. I will do sports every day to make my body strong. I will work hard at my subjects, such as English, Chinese and so on. I want to improve these subjects to make my teachers happy. Then my teachers will be proud of me. I am going to help my classmates with their lessons. I will help my parents do some housework. They are so tired. I have confidence in myself. I want to be a very good student next year.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写作者的新年计划。全文主要用一般将来时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如do sports ，work hard at，such as，and so on， be proud of，help with，have confidence in等短语，文中还用到了不定式做状语如 to make my body strong，to make my teachers happy；不定式做宾语 to improve these subjects；文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。