Question

某英语杂志社举办以“健康生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，以“ How to keep healthy ? ”为题写一篇英语短文参加比赛。
内容要求：
1 健康的重要。2 你是如何保持身体健康的。3 今后需要注意的地方。
写作要求：
1.字数80左右；2.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；
3.不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                  

Answer 1

How to keep healthy ?
As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to tell you how to keep healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
Best wishes and stay healthy．

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在及将来时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。在叙述中运用了大量连词及序数词，是的文章看起来条理分明，层次清楚。如:as由于，作为；so因此；first首先；短语如go to bed去睡觉；get up起床；stay up熬夜；a lot of许多；build up建立，培养；at once立即等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。