题目内容
【题目】作文
进入初中以来,你一定结交了不少好朋友吧?假设你是大明(或者玲玲), 请你以My good friend 为题,介绍你的朋友Tony 在运动、饮食、爱好以及其他方面的情况。词数80—100词。
Tony的具体情况如下:
来自伦敦,是你的最好朋友,喜欢唱歌和跳舞,最喜欢的运动是踢足球。他喜欢健康食品,特别是蔬菜和水果,不喜欢可乐。他最喜欢中国历史(Chinese history),经常和你一起打游戏。晚上他喜欢上网,听音乐。
My good friend—Tony
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【答案】
My good friend--Tony
I have many friends, Tony is my best friend. He is from London, and he likes singing and dancing. But his favourite sport is playing football. He often plays football with us after school. He likes healthy food and he likes vegetables and fruit best. But he doesn’t like coke, because coke is bad for our health. He likes Chinese history best. He often plays games with me, and he often goes on line and listens to music at night. He is a good boy, we all like him.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以大明或是玲玲的身份,介绍一下自己的好朋友Tony的情况。题目中给出了我们关于Tony的详细信息,我们只需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知,这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称he来表达,因此我们要特别注意谓语动词形式上的变化,当主语是第三人称单数的时候,谓语动词应该加s或es。写作时,我们需要注意将题目中给出的所有信息都要表达出来,不能遗漏要点。而且表达的时候,注意先后顺序,不要写的杂乱无章。还要将平时积累的关于介绍人物时可以用的短语和句型都用上,使短文在意思完整的基础上,表达更加流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文,短文中作者按照题目给出的提纲,详细的给我们介绍了自己的好朋友Tony的情况。首先这篇短文的内容很完整,作者把题目中给出的所有信息都写了出来,还加上了几句,如He often plays football with us after school.和because coke is bad for our health.。其次这篇短文的作者使用了正确的时态和动词的形式,特别是动词第三人称单数的变化。第三,这篇短文中作者使用了较丰富的句型、句式,尤其是一些连词的使用,使短文整体很有表现力,意思也很连贯、流畅。短文中较好的句子有He is from London, and he likes singing and dancing.、He likes healthy food and he likes vegetables and fruit best. 、But he doesn’t like coke, because coke is bad for our health、He often plays games with me, and he often goes on line and listens to music at night.等。