Question

书面表达（满分15分）
假如你是一名九年级学生李林， 你刚认识的美国笔友Mike想了解你的情况。请你根据以下表格所提供的信息给他写一封邮件介绍你自己。
注意：内容应包含所给信息，可适当发挥。词数80左右。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

星座	巨蟹座 ( Cancer)
个性特征	善良，随和，喜欢暖色……
爱好	看电影，户外运动
烦恼	父母要求严, 作业多，睡眠不足，经常感到疲倦，没有时间做自己喜欢做的事
解决方法	听音乐，和朋友聊天
愿望	作业少一些，盼望寒假里有足够的时间放松自己……

Dear Mike,
My name is Li Lin. I am a Grade 9 student.  ___________________________
                                                                          
                                                                          
What about you? Can you tell me more about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin

Answer 1

Dear Mike,
My name is Li Lin. I’m a student of Grade 9. My star sign is Cancer. I’m a kind and easy-going person. I like warm colours such as orange and yellow, because they can bring me success and cheer me up. I love watching films and I like outdoor activities. But my parents are strict with me in my study and I always have a lot of homework every day, so I have no time to do what I want to do. I often feel tired and sleepy. But I have my own ways to deal with these problems, for example, I listen to music and chat with my friends in my free time. I hope I will have less homework and I’m looking forward to having enough time to relax myself during the winter holidays.
What about you? Can you tell me more about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文的时态主要是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。