Question

【题目】书面表达 （满分20分，其中表达占15分，书写占5分）

现在环境污染越来越严重，请你写一封100词左右的信呼吁人们保护环境，遵守规则。要点如下，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要点如下：

1.保持周围环境清洁，不要……，不要……；

2.在公共场所大声谈笑是粗鲁无礼的，在图书馆……；

3.如果有人挡住你的路，可以说“劳驾”然后足够有礼貌等他移动；

4.离开教室时关闭所有的灯，购物时……；

5.还应解释保护环境的重要性；

6.发出倡议。（1-2句）

Dear all,

The environment around us is becoming worse and worse. We must do something to stop it．

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Yours sincerely，

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear all,

The environment around us is becoming worse and worse. We must do something to stop it．

First, we shouldn’t throw litter everywhere. Don’t pick the flowers by the street. We must keep the environment around us clean and tidy. Next, it’s rude and impolite to talk and laugh loudly in public places. We must keep quiet in the library.If someone is in your way, you may say “Excuse me” and be polite enough to wait till he moves. Turn off all the lights when we leave the classroom. We had better take our own bags when shopping. Moreover, we should explain the importance of protecting the environment.We will live a green life if everyone takes action to protect the environment

Yours sincerely，

Tom

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料比较详细，要点清晰，我们要做的就是用英语把这些要点内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，尤其是连接词的使用，这为文章增色不少。