Question

宁波将举办一次展示"最美家乡"为主题的征文比赛,请根据下表中的提示内容写一份调查报告,可适当展开联想.(词数70-80)

places	Name	Reasons
Middle School	No.1 midlle school	The best teachers, the most beautiful
Movie Theater	Town cinema	The biggest screen, the most comfortable seats
Clothing Store	HuaXing Clothing Store	The best quality, the most popular
Hospital	Li Huili Hospital	The friendliest service , not expensive

要求：1.词数不少于90；

2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯，可适当发挥；

3.文中不得使用真实的人名、校名。

Here are the results of a survey about the best places in Ningbo_.________

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Answer 1

Here are the results of a survey about the best places in Ningbo. First，No.1 midlle school is the best with the best teachers and the most beautiful campus. Second，Town Cinema is famous for its biggest screen and the most comfortable seats. Next，HuaXing Clothing Store is very popular with people，because clothes there have the

best quality and the most popular style. Last，hospitals are important and necessary for a city. Li Huili Hospital has the friendliest service but not expensive at all !

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍自己的家乡。本题给出的材料很详细，首先要认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。给出的要点都要出现在文章中。

【亮点说明】这篇短文层次清晰，表达准确，符合调查报告的要求——客观。使用的虽然以简单句为主， 但使用了很好的一些短语进行表达 如：be famous for “以……..闻名”，be popular with “受…….欢迎” 等。但是通过简单句式和原因状语从句的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的家乡有了一个比较全面的了解，。