Question

浦东中学七（1）班的同学在本周五去Yandu Park 游玩。假如你是方老师，请根据以下要点写一份70词左右的发言稿，介绍本次活动安排，可以适当发挥。

要点如下：

上午7:30，在学校集合；

公园离学校有点远，坐公共汽车去，大约要花费半小时；

可以在公园里湖划船；也可以在湖前面的操场踢足球；也可以在操场左边的草地上做游戏；还可以在公园操场右边的超市买食品和饮料……

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Answer 1

One possible version:

My dear students,

All the students in Class 1, Grade 7 will take a trip to Yandu Park on Friday. Let’s meet at the school gate at 7:30a.m. The park is a little far, so it’ll take us about half an hour by bus. There will be a lot of things to do. You can go boating in the lake or play football on the playground. You can also play games on the grass. And it’s convenient to buy food and drink in the supermarket there. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.

Yours

Mr. Fang

【解析】

试题分析：本文是去Yandu Park游玩活动安排，包括时间、地点和安排。应该用一般将来时，主语是第一人称。注意句子的连贯。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在70词左右的篇幅中，恰当地运用了一些比较好的句式和短语，如take a trip to，it’ll take us about half an hour by bus. go boating ；it’s convenient to buy...；have a good time等。

考点：提纲作文。