Question

书面表达。（共10分）

下面图表里是Lily和Jack两个人的资料, 请根据图表所列的信息, 写一篇小短文, 介绍两人的情况。要求60-70词。开头已给出。

Name	Country	Favorite color/food/animals	Get up	Go to bed
Lily	England	pink, jiaozi, pandas	6:30	9:30
Jack	Canada	blue, hamburgers, lions	6:40	9:50

Lily is an English girl. She likes pink very much.

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Lily is an English girl. She likes pink very much. Jiaozi is her favorite food. Her favorite animals are pandas. In the morning, she gets up at 6:30 and in the evening she often goes to bed at 9:30. Jack is from Canada. His favorite color is blue. He says hamburgers are his favorite food. He likes lions very much. He often gets up at 6:40 in the morning and goes to bed at 9:50 in the evening. Lily and Jack are both in Class One. They are good friends.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍莉莉和杰克的国籍，喜好以及起床和睡觉时间。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She likes.....; Jack is from......;He says......;Lily and Jack are......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意提纲中所列内容要表达完整。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了莉莉的国籍、喜好和起床睡觉时间，接下来介绍杰克的国籍、喜好和起床睡觉时间，最后指出他们是好朋友。此处get up, go to bed, be from, in the evening等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。