Question

在日常生活中，我们可能会遇到一些令人烦恼的事情需要得到朋友的帮助。假如你叫李明，是中学生张华的QQ聊友，昨天你收到了他的一个电子邮件。请写一封不少于60个词的回复，针对他的问题谈谈你的看法，并提出你的建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。

Hi! Li Ming, I happened to see a cell phone on my way home after school today. So I was very happy to pick it up. To my surprise, it was an iPhone4. I put it into my pocket. Now it is lying on the table in my bedroom. I haven’t told my parents about it. I don’t know if I should return it to its owner. What do you think of it? Can you give me some advice?                                                           Yours, Zhang Hua

 

Hi! Zhang Hua, I’m glad to get your message. _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Do you agree with me? Yours, Li Ming

Answer 1

Hi! Zhang Hua,
I’m glad to get your message. Now an iPhone4 is so popular that everyone wants to have one. If this happens to me, I will probably have the same idea as you. But what do you feel about if you lose anything? I think the owner must be very worried at the moment. So you should return it to its owner at once. You’d better check its phone numbers and choose one of them to call back. In this way, maybe you can find its owner. The owner will be sure to thank you for your kindness. If you don’t have time, you can ask your parents or your teachers for help.
Do you agree with me?
Yours,
Li Ming

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题材料主要是一封来信，故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信，争取在回信中对来信中的问题都有所回应。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。