Question

短文写作。请分别根据以下要求作文。（12分）
“漳州市英语名师工作室”的老师们利用网络组织了一场 “实现我们的中国梦”（To Realize Our China Dream）为主题的专题演讲活动。请你根据你的具体情况填写下列调查问卷，并结合调查问卷的任选四点内容写一篇演讲稿。（10分）
Questionnaire
Yes      No
Do you know much about Chinese culture?                (     )  (     )
Do you have any hobbies?                              (     )  (     )
Have you ever lied to others?                            (     )  (     )
Do you know something about traffic rules?                (     )  (     )
You have some good habits, don’t you?                    (     )  (     )
Did you read any books on how to protect the earth?         (     )  (     )
What will you do if someone is in trouble?
□Take care of her.      □Be kind to her.        □Be ready to help her.
要求：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
2. 词数为80个词左右。开头结尾已给出，不列入词数范围。
3. 重点突出，可根据相关内容进行适当拓展。
My dear teachers and friends, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech about my ideas to achieve our China Dream. I hope all of us can get together to make our dream come true!
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Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

My dear teachers and friends, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech about my ideas to achieve our China Dream. I hope all of us can get together to make our dream come true!
In my opinion, to learn much more knowledge about our country and Chinese culture is very important. China is a great country which has a long history. It is our motherland. So as a middle school student, we should study hard so that we can make great contributions to our country. And we must respect the elder including our parents and teachers. Try to be polite, such as saying “Good morning” when we meet them. Don’t tell lies. Remember, honesty is one of the most valuable qualities. Sometimes, it is always brave to acknowledge our mistakes. And we should try to be kind to others, and ready to help others when they are in trouble. What’s more, Obeying the rules such as the traffic rules and school rules is good for us. Don’t break the rules, or you’ll be in danger. Last but not least, we should learn to protect our environment so that we can be a greener person.
I believe if we can do the things above, our China Dream will come true in our future!
Thank you for listening!

试题分析：这是一篇根据所给要求写一篇语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范的作文。这就要求仔细分析所给要求，然后考虑清楚写作思路。细节方面就要注意时态，语法以及衔接词的运用等。
【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把要求的内容叙述清楚，做到了首尾呼应，是一篇不错的文章。