Question

假如你是王洁，你在美国的笔友John Black想到中国旅行，请根据提示给他发E—mail。
提示：1.北京是中国的首都，它历史悠久，名胜古迹不胜枚举，这里有万里长城，故宫（the Imperial Palace），颐和园（the Summer Palace）等。夏秋是来北京的最佳时节；
2.夏季到大连、青岛的海滨，冲浪是件乐事；
3.还可到海南，那里四季如春，你可以旅游、潜水，你一定会玩的很开心；
4.发邮件日期12月10日.

Answer 1

Dear John,
I' ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That's a good idea. As you know Beijing is the capital of China. It has a
long history and there are many places of interest: the Great Wall,
Tian’anmen Square, the Great Hall of the People, the National Museum of China, the Forbidden City, Beihai Park and so on. Summer and autumn
is the best time to come here. You can go surfing in Dalian or
Qingdao, the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan,
the weather is always warm, no matter in summer or in winter, there
you can go scuba diving. I think you'll have a good time.
I hope you'll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie

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