Question

所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你是盐城市第一中学八（1）班学生Kimi，请你以Protect Earth and Love Animals 为题写一篇演讲稿，在学校举办的“第六届年度英语节”活动中作专题演讲。
要求：1. 演讲内容包含所有要点，省略号部分要作适当发挥。
2. 条理清晰、字迹工整。词数80词左右。

Your idea	share the same home with other living things
Problems	1. cut down trees and forests 2. hunt animals for money 3. make more space for farms and buildings 4. many natural disasters happen every year
Ways	1. the government: make laws to protect the environment and animals 2. we students: …
Importance	If we do/don’t do …, …

Protect Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting Earth and loving animals.
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That’s all. Thank you very much!

Answer 1

Protect Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting Earth and loving animals.
I think that we should share the same home with other living things. But in fact, there are many unsatisfying problems in our society. People often cut down trees and forests and hunt animals for money. Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals. As a result, many natural disasters happen every year.
So I advise that we should take some actions to protect our earth and animals. Ar first, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals. And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.
If we do this, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peacefully as they wish. But if we don’t, everything will beyond our imagination. So let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us human and animals as well.

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合表格中的内容完成这篇演讲稿，我们要用热情洋溢的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含你个人的观点、现在存在的问题、解决的办法以及其重要性等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文详细、全面地描述了演讲稿的内容，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。语言铿锵有力、有说服力；其中使用了一些复杂句式和短语，包含状语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少.如Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals，And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。