Question

人人都有朋友 初中三年同学之间结下深厚的友谊。假设你叫张华，你的笔友李敏在下面这封信中介绍了他的学友，请你写一封70 词左右的回信，说说你好友的基本情况和兴趣爱好。
注意：1、回信的开头和结尾已给出.但不计入总词教：
2、信中请勿使用朋友的真实校名和姓名
Dear Zhang Hua.
How are you? In this letter I’d like to say something about my best friend.
My best friend is Gao Jun. He is fifteen. He is tall with short hair. We are in the same class.
Gao Jun is smart and friendly in class, he listens to the teachers carefully At home, he often helps his mother with housework He does well in all his lessons. And he is always ready to help others. So, everyone in our class likes him
Gao Jun seems to have a special interest in writing. He wants to be a writer in the future.
Both of us like playing basketball .We usually play it after class. We feel happy when we are together. I think we will be good friends forever.
What about your best friend? Can you tell me something about him( her)?
Yours.
Li Min.
Dear Li Min.
Thank you for telling me so much about your best friend Gao Jun.
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Yours.
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Li Min.
Thank you for telling me so much about your best friend Gao Jun. Liu Nan is my best friend. She’s sixteen years old. She was born in Guangzhou. She lives with her family in Huaihua. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.
She loves listening to music. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. She wants to be a teacher when she grows up.
We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.
Yours.
Zhang Hua

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。给出的材料主要是一封来信，故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信,正确对来信内容都有所回应。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。