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4.话题描写根据所给话题写五句话,要求语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范.句子中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名.
话题:My family.

分析 本题是根据主题,写出意思连贯、语法正确的五句话,应该说My family这个主题,学生们比较有话写,写作要点可以落脚在:1.家庭成员及工作.2.爱好.3.我对家庭的看法.通篇时态应该以一般现在时态为主.

解答 There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and I.My father is a policeman and my mother is a nurse.I'm a middle school student and I study hard.I love my family.

点评 命题作文的要求比较宽泛,应注意下面几点:(1)注意人称,审清要用的人称. (2)注意时态的正确使用(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,使各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺.

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写作要点:
1.表达得知他要来你校学习之后你的喜悦之情.
2.介绍你家的情况.
(1)位置:在你的学校旁边,附近有公园.
(2)成员:爸爸(喜欢下象棋)、妈妈(擅长做中国食物)和你.
3.对他到来之后如何尽快适应(get used to)新的生活提出具体建议.
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名.
2,可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯.
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰.
4.至少80词.
Dear David.
How is everything going?I'm very glad to hear that you will come to my school to study for three months.My parents and I all wish you to live with us.My home is near from my school.And there is a park nearby.
In my home,my father likes playing chess.My mother likes cooking Chinese food.It's delicious.I think you will like it.I like playing basketball after school.We can play it in the park.
You can get used to the new life in China quickly if you live with us.You know,it is very important.
I hope to hear from you soon.
                                                    Yours.
                                                    Lin Dong.

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