Question

12．假如你是林动，想邀请即将来你校进行为期三个月学习的英国笔友David到你家来住．根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件．
写作要点：
1．表达得知他要来你校学习之后你的喜悦之情．
2．介绍你家的情况．
（1）位置：在你的学校旁边，附近有公园．
（2）成员：爸爸（喜欢下象棋）、妈妈（擅长做中国食物）和你．
3．对他到来之后如何尽快适应（get used to）新的生活提出具体建议．
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．
2，可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．
4．至少80词．
Dear David．
How is everything going？I'm very glad to hear that you will come to my school to study for three months．My parents and I all wish you to live with us．My home is near from my school．And there is a park nearby．
In my home，my father likes playing chess．My mother likes cooking Chinese food．It's delicious．I think you will like it．I like playing basketball after school．We can play it in the park．
You can get used to the new life in China quickly if you live with us．You know，it is very important．
I hope to hear from you soon．
                                                    Yours．
                                                    Lin Dong．

Answer 1

分析 本文是想邀请即将来校进行为期三个月学习的英国笔友David到家来住的一篇文章，可以一般现在时和一般将来时结合进行写作，写作要点包括：1．表达喜悦之情．2．介绍你家的情况．（在你的学校旁边，附近有公园．爸爸喜欢下象棋、妈妈擅长做中国食物和你）．3．如何尽快适应新的生活提出具体建议．

解答 I'm very glad to hear that you will come to my school to study for three months．My parents and I all wish you to live
with us．My home is near from my school．And there is a park nearby．
   In my home，my father likes playing chess．My mother likes cooking Chinese food．It's delicious．I think you will like it．I like playing basketball after school．We can play it in the park．
   You can get used to the new life in China quickly if you live with us．You know，it is very important．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．