题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共1题,满分15分)
人人都在追求幸福生活,不同的人追求幸福生活的方式不同,请以My Happy Life为题,写一篇英语作文,介绍一下你的幸福生活。作文必须包含以下要点:
在家你经常帮助父母和其他家庭成员,他们也很爱你;在学校认真学习,尊敬老师,与同学相处友好;平时不乱扔垃圾,宽容待人;有许多好朋友,始终面带着笑容面对一切。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下连贯;2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3. 词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Happy Life
Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it.
【答案】
My Happy Life
Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it. I have my own way to stay happy.
At home I help my parents with housework. And I also often help my grandparents. We all love each other. At school, I work hard at all the subjects. The teachers all love me. And I get on well with my classmates. I never throw litter around. I never say bad words about others. I have a lot of friends. I often talk with them about many interesting things. I am always happy. I am always wearing a smile on my face.
【解析】
试题分析:本题要求小作者写一篇关于自己幸福生活的短文。写作中注意把列举的要点介绍清楚,并提出自己建议。写作中注意使用连词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误,写好后反复读几遍,适当修改。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如Different people have different ways to get it. I have my own way to stay happy.I often talk with them about many interesting things.等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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