Question

学期即将结束，Li Lei收到一封来自英国笔友Jerry的e-mail，Jerry想邀请他参加北京五日游的活动，可是Li Lei已以制定了自己的寒假计划，不能前往。请根据Li Lei的寒假计划帮他写一封回信。

注意：1.表格内容全部涉及，可以适当发挥；

2. 文章中不得出现真实的人名和班级；

3. 词数约80词，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

Study	Practice English, take guitar lessons
Sports	Exercise more...
Housework	Make the bed...
Travel	Hangzhou, parents, car, two days
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Hi Jerry,

Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't go to Beijing with you. I'm really busy in the coming winter holiday.

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Yours,

Li lei

 

Answer 1

Hi Jerry,

Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't go to Beijing with you. I'm really busy in the coming winter holiday.

In the morning,I’ll practice my English so that Ican get good results next term.Then I’ll run or play basketball in the park because I’ll exercise more than before.

In the afternoon, I’ll take guitar lessons because my parents want me to do well in music. I’ll make the bed, clean the room and help my father water the flowers in the garden.

My parents and I are going to Hangzhou by car for two days. I think we’ll have a good time there. Do you think so ?

Yours,

Li lei

【解析】

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考点：提纲作文。