Question

书面表达

背景设定：在中华人民共和国成立六十周年之际，康康的加拿大朋友Michael想了解康康家乡的变化。假如你是康康，请根据以下提示给Michael 回一封电子邮件。

要求：1、围绕以上内容进行合理表述；

2、所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

3、词数80词左右，开头语已给出(不计入词数)。

提示词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯), telegram, thanks to, rapidly, comfortable, mobile phone, policy

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to learn the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, _______________________________________

Sincerely,

Kangkang

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Writing：One possible version：

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to know the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken placed since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, the living conditions were very poor．There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow．Usually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark house．Most families couldn’t get enough food．The communications were simple and slow．People kept in touch with others far away mainly by letter or telegram．

　　Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recently years．The living conditions are much better and more comfortable．The roads are wide．Some people have their own cars．Most of the people have lived in big new houses．Quite a few adults have mobile phones．Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better．

Sincerely,

Kangkang

　　书面表达评分标准：

　　(一)评分原则：

　　1、本题总分为10分，按5个档次给分。

　　2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　(二)评分细则：

　　第五档9－10分：

　　语言流畅，表达正确，无语法错误，基本上无拼写错误。能写出有一定变化的句式，如主从复合句等。中心突出，有实例。文章有一定长度。大小写、标点符号正确。卷面整洁，书写规范。

　　第四档7－8分：

　　语言运用得当，表达较清楚，句式正确。有实例。无大的语法错误，拼写错误少，书面干净整洁。

　　第三档5－6分：

　　能较完整的表达自己的意思，句式基本通顺，但有较多的语法错误和拼写错误。卷面不太干净。

　　第二档3－4分：

　　基本没有完整的句式，不能表达正确的意思，但有少量正确的句子或短语。语法错误和拼写错误严重。卷面不整洁，涂改情况严重。

　　第一档1－2分：

　　完全不知所云，错误百出。但鼓励学生动手。对动手写的考生与完全正确不动笔的学生要有区别。