某英语杂志社举办以科学饮食.健康生活为主题的英语征文比赛．请你根据下表所列的内容要点.以 The healthier.the happier 为题写一篇英语短文.介绍自己的生活方式.参加比赛．要求:(1)词数100个左右,(2)条理清晰.语义连贯.句式规范.字迹工整,(3)不得出现真实的人名.校名.地名等相关信息．以前的生活方式如今的生活方式感悟内容对� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．某英语杂志社举办以"科学饮食，健康生活"为主题的英语征文比赛．请你根据下表所列的内容要点，以"The healthier，the happier"为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的生活方式，参加比赛．
要求：
（1）词数100个左右；
（2）条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；
（3）不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．

以前的生活方式	如今的生活方式		感悟
	内容	对健康的影响
不吃早饭，吃太多的快餐，看太多的电视，过多地玩电脑游戏…	饮食	至少两点	至少一点
	睡眠
	锻炼
	心理健康（倾诉、放松）

The healthier，the happier
In the past，Iseldom had breakfast．Instead，I ate too much fast food．I watched TV and played computer games so much that they had a bad
effect on my health．This made me feel uncomfortable from time to time．

But now Ihave changed a lot．I have a healthy diet，and it provides me with enough energy．I eat more fruit and vegetables instead of meat and sweets，and it keeps me healthy．I get up early and go to bedearly．Because I have enough sleep，I feel active and energetic all day．Every day I do exercise for half an hour．I usually play basketball after school，which makes me strong．It makes me relaxed and happy．When I have problems with my study，I talk to my friends and ask my teachers or parents for help．
And it makes me feel less stressed and feel relaxed．/When something worries me，I often talk with others instead of keeping it to myself．

I thinkhaving a healthy life style is important for me．If I am healthier，I will be happier．．

分析本文是一篇提纲加图表的作文，线索很明显，分成了三段，当描述以前的生活方式的时候，该部分时态为一般过去时．描述如今的生活方式时，该部分时态可为一般现在时、现在进行时或现在完成时．写自己的感悟时，该部分时态可为一般现在时、一般将来时，感悟的内容需要补充．人称用第一人称来写．

解答 The healthier，the happier
In the past，I seldom had breakfast．Instead，I ate too much fast food．I watched TV and played computer games so much that they had a bad effect on my health．This made me feeluncomfortable from time to time．
But now I have changed a lot．I have a healthy diet，and it provides me with enoughenergy．I eat more fruit and vegetables instead of meat and sweets，and it keeps me healthy．I get up early and go to bed early．Because I have enough sleep，I feel active and energetic all day．Every day I do exercise for half an hour．I usually play basketball after school，which makes me strong．It makes me relaxed and happy．When I have problems with my study，I talk to my friends and ask my teachers or parents for help．And it makes me feel less stressed and feel relaxed．When something worries me，I often talk with others instead of keeping it to myself．
I think having a healthy lifestyle is important for me．If I am healthier，I will be happier．

点评这是一篇给材料作文，短文的结构很明显，已经给出．动笔前先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．