Question

8．在贵州一些偏远山区，许多学生住得离学校较远，每天上学要步行1个多小时，因为家里贫穷，中午他们只能吃从家里带的冷饮和冷菜，有的已经变坏了．一些学生甚至一天只吃早、晚两顿，没吃中饭，下午就饿着上课．
请以"You and me"为题写一篇英语短文，介绍他们的状况并谈谈你的感受和打算．
要求：
（1）可根据需要对所给材料进行取舍或适当发挥，不必逐字翻译；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
（3）词数80～～110左右．
You and me
You live in a mountain village．It's far away from your school．It takes you one hour to get there every day．To save money，you bring food for lunch．At noon，it is cold，some even goes bad．Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch，only two meals one day．
I never worry about my life．Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal!What different lives we are living!As a teenager，surely I should do something for you like raising money，collecting books，etc．In the future，I want to be a volunteer to help you．
We are living under the same sky and let's share the same happiness!．

Answer 1

分析 本题是一篇给定话题的书面表达，写作的话题为你和我，具体内容为介绍贵州偏远山区学生的学习和生活情况，以及提出个人的感受和个人的未来打算．在写作时应注意符合题意，同时应注重符合实际和语言的准确性．根据文章内容，本文的时态应为一般现在时，人称为第二和第一人称．用到的主要句型及词汇有：It takes sb some time to do sth，go bad，never，sometimes，be far away from，worry about，I should…，let's share…等．

解答 You and me
You live in a mountain village．It's far away from your school．It takes you one hour to get there every day．To save money，you bring food for lunch．At noon，it is cold，some even goes bad．Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch，only two meals one day．
I never worry about my life．Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal!What different lives we are living!As a teenager，surely I should do something for you like raising money，collecting books，etc．In the future，I want to be a volunteer to help you．
We are living under the same sky and let's share the same happiness!

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．动笔前一定要审好题，这是写好作文的前提和关键，不跑题，把握好大的时态和人称，把握好文章的主次．行文中要注意语句的连贯，句式要丰富一些，避免成为流水账似的文章，同时不要受汉语思维的影响，要用地道的英语表达出来．注意时态及语法的正确，尽量避免一些不必要的错误，以免影响分数．