Question

19．假设你们学校在澳大利亚的友好学校的师生想要了解你校学生的兴趣和爱好，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的兴趣和爱好及其意义．
注意：文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是向澳大利亚的友好学校的师生介绍自己的兴趣和爱好，描述事实应该用一般现在时态，写作要点应该包括：1．你的爱好是什么？2．为什么爱好这件事？写作的时候可以适当发挥，注意一定要词数达到100词左右．

解答 My hobby is collecting stamps．I have been collecting stamps for 10 years．Usually I collect stamps in three ways．When I get letters，I cut the stamps off the envelops； Every year I go to post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I also go to the stamp market to buy old stamps and foreign stamps； I have lots of friends who have the same hobby as I，so I sometimes exchange my stamps with them．
    I think my hobby is very interesting．First，it helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge； Second，I can enjoy the beauty of art； Third，by exchanging stamps，I have made more friends； Fourth，it's also a way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．
    Hobbies make our life more colorful．What about your hobbies？

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．