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请以“My dream”为题,写一篇短文。
1. 语句通顺流畅,时态正确。
2. 字数在80个字左右。

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。话题贴近学生学习生活,学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题,挖掘深层内涵,勾勒要点,并适当发挥。根据话题可知本文主要是第一人称,行文时注意时态语及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,使文章自然流畅。同时,使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:be friendly to sb、cheered sb up、With the help of、Since then、hoped to do sth、In order to、as much as possible、help sb out of、come true等,这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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请阅读下面短文,在短文后表格中的空白处填上适当的单词(注意:每空1个单词}。
Dont Rest on Your Laurels
Have you ever heard the saying “Don’t rest on your laurels”?“ Laurels” means the achievements you have already got. The saying suggests that you shouldn’t be so satisfied with your achievements that you’ll no longer try to improve.
As to this saying, Mike Perham has set us a good example. Born in 1992 in Hertfordshire, England, Mike was just 14 when hebecame the youngest person to sail across the Atlantic Ocean. You might think the achievements are good enough, but Mike doesn’t think so. At the age of 17,he became the youngest person to sail all by himself around the world on a nine-month voyage(航海).
Mike is now 19, and he is still trying his bestto break the records and push himself further. For his next adventure, he plans to fly around the world on his own, making him the first person of all ages to both sail and fly around the world.
Mike wants his achievements to encourage young people to realize their dreams. Since his adventures, he has travelled widely, speaking at schools and youth clubs in the UK, Hong Kong and Australia on the theme of “Live the Dream”.
Amazing Facts:
Mike started sailing when hewas seven.
His trans-Atlantic crossing began at Gibraltar and ended in Antigua.
His round-the-world yacht(游艇)was called TotallyMoney.com.
Title:Don’t Rest on Your Laurels
Passage outline
Supporting details
The explanation of the saying
“Don’t rest on your laurels" means that you shouldn’t stop 小题1:         only because of your achievements.
Amazing facts
? Atthe age of 7, Mike started sailing.
? At the age of 14,sailing across the Atlantic Ocean made
Mike become the 小题2:       one who set a record.
? At the age of 17, Mike had a nine-month voyage of sailing 小题3:          around the world.
Present situation
Mike is 19 now. He is trying his best to break the records. His小题4:          to fly round the world by himself will make him the first person to both sail and fly.
The 小题5:         of Mike’s achievements
Mike’s speeches give young people courage to realize their dreams.
阅读短文,根据短文内容回答问题。(共10分,每小题2分)
Have you had this experience? You are watching a movie. A man is shooting(射击) on the screen. The picture is so real that you think he is shooting at you.
Three-dimensional(3D)movies use special technology to make pictures seem more real and exciting than two-dimensional ones.
So far we can only see 3D movies in the cinema with a special screen and projector(放映机). But soon, we will be able to watch them in our living rooms. Last month, Woods Company told reporters that it plans to bring 3D televisions to homes in the near future.
“The 3D train is on the track, and we are ready to drive it home,” said the President. 3D movies and TV programs are fun to watch, but do you know how they are made? It is much easier to understand if we do an experiment.
Hold one of your fingers up at arm’s length and close one eye. Then try closing the other eye. As you move between open eyes, you should see your finger “jumping” left and right against the background.
This happens because our two eyes are about 4 cm away from each other. The separation causes each eye to see the world from a different angle(角度). The brain puts these two views together. What you see becomes three-dimensional.
3D movies are made using two video cameras at the same time, which creates two different images(影像). When the movie plays in a cinema, two projectors put the two images on the screen. With a pair of 3D glasses, the two images are separated and each image only enters one eye. Your brain puts the two pictures back together, and the pictures on the screen become three-dimensional.
小题1: Do 3D movies use special technology to make pictures?
小题2:What does Woods Company plan to do in the near future?
小题3: What can you see when you move your finger between open eyes?
小题4: How many video cameras are needed when making a 3D movie?
小题5: What is the passage mainly about?

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