Question

书面表达（共15分）

目前，九年级的同学们学习任务繁重，易产生焦虑等情绪。你的朋友Simon以往性格开朗，最近因感觉压力大而变得少言寡语，与同学沟通困难；他在英语学习上有困难，而且考前紧张失眠；因父母让他放弃他喜爱的篮球活动而与父母吵架。假设你叫Joe，请根据Simon的问题，给他写封E-mail，提出解决方案。

要求：1、针对问题，用不同的方式提建议，其中包含虚拟语气。

      2、语言流畅，语法正确。

      3、词数:80 – 100。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear Simon,

I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3. __________

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Best wishes,

Joe

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Simon,

    I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3. I’m writing to give you some help.

    You used to be outgoing and now you don’t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. So you don’t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often. As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practice more after class? Learn to relax！Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.

    I hope what I said could help you.

    Best wishes,

    Joe

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要写为什么写信给Simon,Simon的烦恼是什么和他给Simon的建议。全文主要用一般现在时态，还用到了虚拟语气。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如used to be ，get along well with ，communicate with，as for，take a long walk， pay more attention to,instead of 等短语，虚拟语气 If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.，文中还用到了宾语从句 I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3.。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。