Question

【题目】书面表达（本题有1小题；共计15分）

友情在我们的生活中非常重要，每个人都有各自的朋友。那么朋友间应该相同还是不一样呢？下面是我和我的朋友Mary间的一些信息，请根据表格进行比较，并发表对朋友间异同的看法。

注意：文章必须包含表格内所有信息，可进行适当发挥。

词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

	I	Mary
Appearance	1.60cm, long straight hair	1.65cm, long curly hair
Personality	shy, friendly	outgoing ,friendly
Hobby	read books, interesting, everyday surf the Internet, relax, sometimes	read books , learn a lot, everyday traveling , open my eyes, once a year

Friendship is very important in our everyday life . Everyone has their own friends, just like Mary and I .We are good friends._________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Friendship is very important in our everyday life . Everyone has their own friends, just like Mary and I .We are good friends. We have something different. He is taller and stronger than me.I long straight hair, but Mary has long curly hair. I’m shy but she is outing. We are both friendly. we have some same hobbies.We both like reading. I think it’s interesting,she thinks she can learn a lot from the book.

I alaways like to surf the Internet. It makes me relax. But she likes travelling ,she thinks it can open her eyes.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如she thinks it can open her eyes.等，I think等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。