Question

你是学校英文报的小记者李华，上周你们学校刚举办完“英语话剧节”。请你根据下面表格中的提示，报道艺术节的情况，并谈谈自己的看法和感想。

English Opera Festival
时间	12月31日
地点	学校体育馆
参加对象	全体初三学生和老师
目的	培养英语学习的兴趣；展示同学们的才能；加强班级之间的交流。
内容	国外著名戏剧，如：The Phantom of the Opera, cinderella等
同学们的评价	表演非常精彩；演出服装很漂亮；音乐很感人、动听；英语发音非常准确。
你的看法	？

（可用词语：costume 演出服装）
注意： 1. 词数80左右
不得透露学校，姓名任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
English Opera Festival
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Reported by Li Hua

Answer 1

English Opera Festival
Last week, the English Opera Festival has been held in our school. It was on December 31^st. All the teachers and the students attended it at the school gym. The purpose of this festival is to improve the interest of learning English，show the talents of the students’ and strengthen the communication between the classes. At the festival, the students performed the famous foreign opera, such as The Phantom of the Opera, Cinderella and so on. The performance is very wonderful and the costume is beautiful. The music was very moving and the pronunciation was very perfect. I think the festival is a success. And it is good for our students to learn English well.

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们介绍一下学校英语话剧节的情况，有关于这个话剧节具体的内容，时间、地点、内容、目的等。我们需要把这项事项用正确的英语表达出来。其中还要包括自己对这个话剧节的评价。故这篇短文的结构还是比较简单的，难点就是我们要把这些内容准确的用英语表达出来，并且行文连贯，表达流畅。同时还要注意文章中使用正确的时态，一般过去时和一般现在时结合使用。
【亮点说明】这篇范文较好的完成了书面表达的任务。首先文章层次清楚，内容详细。文章中包括了表格中给出的所有要点，并且表达层次清楚，不累赘。用两句话点明了话剧节的时间、地点及参加对象，简单明了。其次文章的主次分明，像这次话剧节的目的、内容及评价等应该是这篇短文的主要内容，所以所占篇幅较大。最后文章中词汇运用准确，表达流畅。文章中较好的句式有he purpose of this festival is to improve the interest of learning English、The music was very moving and the pronunciation was very perfect、I think the festival is a success等。