题目内容
【题目】书面表达((本题共有1小题, 共计20分)
每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程,从幼稚走向成熟,从逆境走向成功,请你回忆一下你在成长过程中所经历的一次蜕变,把它写出来与我们一起分享,好吗?要求短文内容包含以下信息:1.变化前后分别是什么样子的?
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么?
3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力?
4.谈谈你变化后的感受。
提示:1.字数要求在80-100词左右
2.短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息
3.开头已给出不计入总数。
makes me change
I used to be
【答案】
My mother’s diary makes me change
I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, it is because of my mother’s diaries.
One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries. Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I also try to understand my mother’s feelings.
I feel very proud of myself whenever I see the smile on my mother’s face.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。主要写其变化前后的样子、促成其转变的主要原因和其为此变化付出的努力。写过去用一般过去时,转变后的现在用一般现在时。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
亮点说明:本文结构紧凑 文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少,首先是look for, try to do , see the smile on my mother’s face.等固定词组,其次还运用了she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes.这些重点句型的运用给文章增色不少。
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